Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/4/19, 6:05 PM
This is awesome :D loving it!
Anonymous
3/4/19, 5:37 PM
It feels like you're about to merge this story with the college jock series. So excited to see that continuing!
Anonymous
3/4/19, 4:29 PM
You just proved my point. Even the lamest superheroes, have endearing qualities. I personally love the 1970's teen titans, Hornblower, Jokers daughter, and Gnark. What one person finds lame or backward, another sees as triumphant and daring. This story in its sweet innocence puts forth a gentle spin on the superhero trope with a message of self acceptance.
Anonymous
3/4/19, 3:42 PM
So hot!!!
Hypnojock18
3/4/19, 3:36 PM
What a fuckin' NASTY hot story!! You got to write a sequel. Making David a cigar smoking leather DADDY,,and his brother and nephews lingerie wearing sissy cocksluts. Because they had always given Joey a lot of shit
Mar 2, 2019
Anonymous
3/4/19, 2:17 PM
love a good take down story. Can't wait for chapter two.
Anonymous
3/4/19, 1:03 PM
thanks man, I love all of your stories
LongtimeFan
3/4/19, 11:25 AM
Hey, don't knock the GLA! :p Flatman, Dinah Saur, Deadman, the unstoppable Squirrel Girl...and my personal favorite, BIG BERTHA! :D
Anonymous
3/4/19, 10:02 AM
loved this story! would love to see Thor or Captain America get changed like this.
3/4/19, 7:09 AM
Congrats on publishing your first story here, tyl7897! This is a promising start, and I hope you contribute many more stories. But I wanted to give you a bit of writing advice, one that could apply to many newbie writers: when it comes to exposition, keep it minimal. You don't need to have the Boss explaining every bit of his magical ability to Roy in a giant info-dump monologue. The story would be smoother (and hotter) if you just used a 3rd person narrator to reveal the most relevant bits of background info when necessary.