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10/29/24, 6:19 PM
A great start to a story, setting the take down briliantly!
Art
10/29/24, 5:38 PM
Photos were fine. Should have been some after they got into the act.

Hypno-boy
10/29/24, 5:50 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) I guess lol, I really only intended them to show you what the characters look like.
Anonymous
10/29/24, 4:46 PM
Where are the rest of the stories? This is so hot. You gotta get cracking on this series.
10/29/24, 2:32 PM
you are so talented... your stories are both scary but also so intensely passionate. I loved it.

10/29/24, 4:38 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you! I think a few scares can make the domination and submission aspect a lot hotter, glad I could deliver on that!
Anonymous
10/29/24, 6:11 AM
Great work as always , I am still surprised that English isn't your first language considering how good your writing is. Is this gonna be your last story for a while ?

10/29/24, 4:35 PM
@Anonymous Probably! I still have a few, but I think they'd need a serious rework, and Halloween was the best moment to post them anyways. Glad you enjoyed them, might come back next year with more!
10/29/24, 4:28 PM
Intrigued to see where this story goes!
Anonymous
10/29/24, 3:58 PM
Great chapter
10/2/24, 6:04 PM
As readers, it's rare we're treated to something so sophisticated and well-written. A lot of times, multi-part stories aren't really thought out in terms of story arcs and character development. As I've said a million times before, it's usually "Then the same thing happens to Bob" for however many chapters keeps the author's attention. Rock Creek Werewolf -- who I know as a friend and biking companion (and who fills out his spandex well) -- you have done the nearly impossible: you've made me like werewolves. Well done -- I'M PROUD OF YOU. You should seriously consider publishing this via amazon.

10/29/24, 10:59 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) I'm going to echo Absman, here. This is one of the best stories I have read on this site, period: the plot is engaging, the sexy is blisteringly hot, the mind control elements are kinky and varied (Hypnotic musk? Yes, please!), and makes me reconsider some things about myself (Okay, maybe I *am* into watersports!). The characters are all fun, their dynamics are varied, and there's even plenty of humor. In truth, it reminds me a hell of a lot of one of his own stories- and as someone who holds Absman up as a paragon of mind control and muscle growth erotica, that is high, HIGH praise! You got me emotionally invested, and now I can't wait to see what happens next!

10/29/24, 2:56 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Thank you for the very kind feedback. It is very much treasured. I’m glad to know this said appealing to at least a few people, & not just being tossed out into the void I appreciated. I sent you a DM. Each for add’l feedback.
10/29/24, 2:07 PM
I love it! Perfect number of characters, the plot was steamy, and the mind corruption was enthralling. You hit a home run with this one.
10/29/24, 2:05 PM
I hope you’ll continue this story or give it an ending. One of the most amazing stories I’ve ever read here!