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10/29/24, 4:28 PM
Intrigued to see where this story goes!
Anonymous
10/29/24, 3:58 PM
Great chapter
10/2/24, 6:04 PM
As readers, it's rare we're treated to something so sophisticated and well-written. A lot of times, multi-part stories aren't really thought out in terms of story arcs and character development. As I've said a million times before, it's usually "Then the same thing happens to Bob" for however many chapters keeps the author's attention. Rock Creek Werewolf -- who I know as a friend and biking companion (and who fills out his spandex well) -- you have done the nearly impossible: you've made me like werewolves. Well done -- I'M PROUD OF YOU. You should seriously consider publishing this via amazon.

10/29/24, 10:59 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) I'm going to echo Absman, here. This is one of the best stories I have read on this site, period: the plot is engaging, the sexy is blisteringly hot, the mind control elements are kinky and varied (Hypnotic musk? Yes, please!), and makes me reconsider some things about myself (Okay, maybe I *am* into watersports!). The characters are all fun, their dynamics are varied, and there's even plenty of humor. In truth, it reminds me a hell of a lot of one of his own stories- and as someone who holds Absman up as a paragon of mind control and muscle growth erotica, that is high, HIGH praise! You got me emotionally invested, and now I can't wait to see what happens next!

10/29/24, 2:56 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Thank you for the very kind feedback. It is very much treasured. I’m glad to know this said appealing to at least a few people, & not just being tossed out into the void I appreciated. I sent you a DM. Each for add’l feedback.
10/29/24, 2:07 PM
I love it! Perfect number of characters, the plot was steamy, and the mind corruption was enthralling. You hit a home run with this one.
10/29/24, 2:05 PM
I hope you’ll continue this story or give it an ending. One of the most amazing stories I’ve ever read here!
10/29/24, 11:22 AM
I like this ending! It leaves a bunch of cool things open, and ties everything up!
Takanashi
10/29/24, 8:31 AM
Simplemente maravilloso
10/29/24, 8:05 AM
Thanks so much for a very hot hypnosis story. I thought the pace of the story and the progression of the seduction was good, given Jamie's apparent predilection to being hypnotized, and the doctor taking every opportunity to deepen Jamie's trance. Like the others though, the mixed up male/female pronouns, misplaced gender-oriented nouns like Domme instead of Dom, and the sudden introduction of MissTique in this last chapter which you had earlier referred to as a man dressed in rubber all became a major distraction. I thought too that opportunities to make a gay story hotter were missed by using girl clerks on every occasion instead of a hot young men. I am still looking forward to further chapters to see how things develop!
Oct 28, 2024
10/29/24, 3:41 AM
I couldn't finish it all last night before blowing a load but I'm back again this morning for more!

10/29/24, 7:19 AM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Haha that really is the best kind of comment I could get! Definite job satisfaction 😆 really glad you enjoyed it!
10/29/24, 6:10 AM
This story is fantastic! Fantasies come to life? Sign me up!