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3/2/19, 11:09 AM
This initial KING REX story is 7 parts (5 formal chapters, a prologue and an epilogue.) As you will see when we get there, the EPILOGUE of this story is sadly negated (continuity-wise) by the PROLOGUE of the sequel, KING REX 2. Confused? Keep reading and trust me -- I've destroyed universes before
Anonymous
3/2/19, 11:06 AM
Excellent work
Anonymous
3/2/19, 11:05 AM
More please!
Mar 2, 2019
Anonymous
3/2/19, 10:23 AM
keep it up!
LongtimeFan
3/2/19, 10:05 AM
Fun idea, well-written, and sexy! Great job. :)
Anonymous
3/2/19, 9:12 AM
I'm sorry. I couldn't read this story. I was confused whenever the quotation marks were used. Are the characters actually saying these ridiculous lines aloud or are these their internal thoughts? If they're saying it out loud, then the story is quite comical. If it's internal thinking, then the author needs to understand when to use quotations and how to write a character's thoughts. I imagined Yassir actually voicing aloud, "Puny white boys" and I burst out loud laughing. Only a character like the Hulk can say that cause it got the biggest laugh in the Avengers. Doesn't work so well here.
3/2/19, 8:44 AM
Loved the first part, with the brothers. It gave us a chance to see the two guys react to the fallout of what they were made to do, and what was going on in their heads when they were commanded to have sex. However, I feel like jumping around from them to the others made the story's tone too inconsistent for my taste. I the writing styles were different, and while I loved the first part, it made the later stories less enjoyable by comparison. Overall, good work! I'll definitely be coming back to this.
Anonymous
3/2/19, 8:43 AM
Such a fantastic story! Love the details without loosing speed. Interesting characters. I'd also love to see where it goes from here. Not much of a fan of feminization, so I'd prefer if Adam would use his charm more for masculinization on Ian or other creative options. But once again, fantastic work. Thanks so much!
Beardfull
3/2/19, 7:03 AM
Liked the story a lot. I only missed nice thick mid eastern facial hair in the story. Well... next time! Good work!
3/2/19, 6:29 AM
It's a great premise, and the descriptions of Kyle's increasing exhibitionism turned me on, but I think the story would work a lot better if it was told entirely from Kyle's perspective. Yassir was such a one-dimensional character that he couldn't even specify his own ethnicity beyond "Middle Eastern," so the parts told from his perspective didn't work for me.