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Mar 2, 2019
3/2/19, 11:46 AM
A nice beginning with really creepy undertones. I'm waiting to see where you're going with this.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
3/2/19, 11:39 AM
looking forward to more!
Anonymous
3/2/19, 11:13 AM
love magic game stories
3/2/19, 11:09 AM
This initial KING REX story is 7 parts (5 formal chapters, a prologue and an epilogue.) As you will see when we get there, the EPILOGUE of this story is sadly negated (continuity-wise) by the PROLOGUE of the sequel, KING REX 2. Confused? Keep reading and trust me -- I've destroyed universes before
Anonymous
3/2/19, 11:06 AM
Excellent work
Anonymous
3/2/19, 11:05 AM
More please!
Mar 2, 2019
Anonymous
3/2/19, 10:23 AM
keep it up!
LongtimeFan
3/2/19, 10:05 AM
Fun idea, well-written, and sexy! Great job. :)
Anonymous
3/2/19, 9:12 AM
I'm sorry. I couldn't read this story. I was confused whenever the quotation marks were used. Are the characters actually saying these ridiculous lines aloud or are these their internal thoughts? If they're saying it out loud, then the story is quite comical. If it's internal thinking, then the author needs to understand when to use quotations and how to write a character's thoughts. I imagined Yassir actually voicing aloud, "Puny white boys" and I burst out loud laughing. Only a character like the Hulk can say that cause it got the biggest laugh in the Avengers. Doesn't work so well here.
3/2/19, 8:44 AM
Loved the first part, with the brothers. It gave us a chance to see the two guys react to the fallout of what they were made to do, and what was going on in their heads when they were commanded to have sex. However, I feel like jumping around from them to the others made the story's tone too inconsistent for my taste. I the writing styles were different, and while I loved the first part, it made the later stories less enjoyable by comparison. Overall, good work! I'll definitely be coming back to this.