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ForgottenCradle
2/28/19, 11:47 AM
again an amazing story from you. I loved it
2/28/19, 11:30 AM
Thank you all for your comments! It's really good to know people enjoyed it, and even better to know what they enjoyed about it. I have a couple of ideas about some situations the hero will find himself in, though to be honest mostly setting based, rather than character based. A homophobic boss isn't something I'd considered, but it might make a fun prequel chapter, how he discovered the effects of the tone. Thanks again for the comments, it really does help with motivation to write more, knowing people want to read it.
Anonymous
2/28/19, 10:52 AM
Hypnotised straight cops are awesome
JR
2/28/19, 9:56 AM
I live a muscle bottom could you shrink hos cock next time?
Anonymous
2/28/19, 9:22 AM
Excellent work Spectacular
Kyle
2/28/19, 7:48 AM
Twist that wears off! I wonder if it will change how Brad approaches the next job. Great story! I loved it. Thanks for writing!
MasterJerker
2/28/19, 7:30 AM
Oh yeah, very much digging this, I hope there's going to be more! Fantastic work as always! :D
Anonymous
2/28/19, 6:58 AM
Chapter 2 cumming soon? Very
Anonymous
2/28/19, 6:58 AM
Absolutely awesome!
Anonymous
2/28/19, 6:47 AM
SO hot!