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leedsdevil
2/26/19, 3:14 AM
What they said.
Anonymous
2/26/19, 3:10 AM
Possibly the best story I've read on this site in a good while. Please keep writing!
Feb 23, 2019
Cigarboy Cody
2/26/19, 3:05 AM
This was a excellent story DADDY!!! When all three become Cigar DADDIES they need to go out and find them some smokebois. After all, every Cigar DADDY needs a few smokebois to worship him
2/26/19, 2:02 AM
First, I loved it. Great mind control and I love the "nothing to hide from each other" mindset. But it so reminded me of what I've heard about Scientology, and as such it was hard to keep focusing on the erotic nature. That said, maybe reminding me of a real cult is a work of pure literary genius. And the way Simon spoke to them in a childish way even added to the cult factor in a weird sort of way...becoming one as men, but being spoke to as children. I look forward to reading more.
Anonymous
2/26/19, 1:46 AM
Killer balance of insight into the characters and humor. And I am absolutely loving the patriarchy submission and unintentional feminization. Can't wait for more
2/26/19, 1:42 AM
The one thing I hate about this story is the way it's raising the bar for the rest of us writers, goddammit! :)
Anonymous
2/26/19, 1:10 AM
Amazing writing - like someone took dictation from your thoughts! Excellent - and hot!
tomozco
2/26/19, 1:02 AM
This is interesting! Seems a bit different from the first part you had previously, but it's equally hot showing the different ways The Organization is acquiring its men. Keep up your usual god work, Hypnothrill! Looking forward to what happens next with Walter and this group of men...or the previous characters as well!
Mdlftr
2/26/19, 12:56 AM
OMG - funny and sexy! Adam is amazingly well drawn - I can almost see and SMELL him, from the vivid way you've written this party scene. BRAVO!
Anonymous
2/26/19, 12:09 AM
I loved the original, this is good.