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Anonymous
2/25/19, 11:10 PM
...fuck.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/25/19, 9:37 PM
How did I miss that on my 18th birthday?
zacthefac76@gmail.com
2/25/19, 9:33 PM
I've beat off to this story so many times, I think if a dude came up to me and said "Bro, I own your ass" that I would fall into a trance just like Eric.
2/25/19, 9:21 PM
I wish all the first time writers were like you. You obviously took time to craft a story, think it through, develop it, and then craft it into a narrative that flowed in readable English, with usage and syntax. I know this is an 'escape site', but it still needs creative writing by creative minds. Keep writing. I'll read it.
LongtimeFan
2/25/19, 9:17 PM
INCREDIBLE! The sex scene was achingly hot (from the elevator to the post-coital bliss), the humor was spot on (I lost it at "Season one Kurt Hummel...God, I hate that show), the description of Adam's body was like a painting--a very sexy painting--and I absolutely LOVE that you made consent such a huge part of Adam's sex drive. But most of all, I love how REAL the whole thing seemed. It was the "don't mention the Lion King" that proved to me you're a master--my own thoughts spin wildly during sex, so to see a character do that, instead of acting like a robot, made me realize your skill. Well done... :)
Anonymous
2/25/19, 8:55 PM
The raw human lust in this was just, mmmm. Again, awesome work.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 7:31 PM
great writing bro. keep it up, you got a great eye and a great voice
Anonymous
2/25/19, 7:10 PM
As you usual. A classic in the making.
2/25/19, 6:30 PM
Again, wonderful. I loved the repeating "I could have said"-motif. Good attention to detail, smooth background delivery, great pacing.
2/25/19, 5:46 PM
Although not literally an illustration of this story, my recent photomanipulation sequence at DeviantArt is definitely connected to the concept of this story thematically: [True Colors](http://fav.me/dcyw2c0) Feel free to check out my other [muscle-growth sequences](https://www.deviantart.com/criskane/gallery/63869464/Muscle-Growth-Images-and-Comics). I’ve done a couple of twinkification images too: [here](http://fav.me/dc9bk0r) and [here](http://fav.me/dcaizhd) Maybe they’ll inspire some story ideas.