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10/29/24, 9:51 PM
Terrific story -- moved along quickly even for its length. Well done!

10/30/24, 12:45 AM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Means a lot coming from someone of your caliber
10/29/24, 11:22 AM
Very hot, I always appreciate a slow burn more than something that's like "BAM! You're hypnotized!"

10/30/24, 12:45 AM
@[Mindwinder](/user/show/296830) Thanks. Been trying a more slow burn style.
Anonymous
10/29/24, 5:17 PM
Good story! Well written!

10/30/24, 12:45 AM
@Anonymous Thank you!
10/29/24, 9:20 PM
Not bad. One critique, though: Earlier in the story, you describe Bobby's eyes as hazel. Later, however, you describe them as green. Otherwise, and as always, I enjoyed the read. :slightly_smiling_face:
10/25/24, 9:47 PM
literally hopped on today to reread fascinum and find you’ve dropped an amazing new story instead! cannot wait to see where this one goes!!

10/28/24, 9:04 PM
@[tumnus](/user/show/917823) :sweat_smile: The next chapter of Fascinum is 2/3 done -- the hardest part for me is always wrapping up my editing. Maybe I should make my New Year's resolution finishing some stories...

10/29/24, 7:45 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Ha! I’ll admit I would love to see some conclusions here and there but overall I have no issues with starting a new story if you’re the one telling it.
10/29/24, 1:08 PM
You didn't fail to surprise and delight me with this adaptation of your college series. Have to research more about the American fraternity house stuff. Thought I knew a bit from TV over the years but reading your piece makes me want to understand it more. Bravo on getting me 🔥

10/29/24, 6:53 PM
@[Titan](/user/show/17556) Thank you! I’m so happy you enjoy it. Some of this is loosely based on Greek Life but I draw heavily from my experience in a fraternity, especially when crafting the characters. Most of the guys are variations on real men I know.
10/29/24, 6:19 PM
A great start to a story, setting the take down briliantly!
Art
10/29/24, 5:38 PM
Photos were fine. Should have been some after they got into the act.

Hypno-boy
10/29/24, 5:50 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) I guess lol, I really only intended them to show you what the characters look like.
Anonymous
10/29/24, 4:46 PM
Where are the rest of the stories? This is so hot. You gotta get cracking on this series.
10/29/24, 2:32 PM
you are so talented... your stories are both scary but also so intensely passionate. I loved it.

10/29/24, 4:38 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thank you! I think a few scares can make the domination and submission aspect a lot hotter, glad I could deliver on that!