Recent Comments

2/25/19, 5:34 PM
More stellar writing, highly descriptive with humor and great attention to detail (such as slamming against every button in the elevator). I have no doubt that I'd enjoy reading your less salacious material just as much.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:55 PM
Pretty good. I liked your original. Look forward to next chapter
Martin
2/25/19, 4:09 PM
I've added "Pt. 2" to the name of this second part of your story. It's better to give each chapter a separate name. It can be anything (not just a numbering), as long as each chapter is named differently.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 3:47 PM
This is so insanely sexy.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 1:50 PM
Oh wow! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks for writing!
Feb 23, 2019
Bulk
2/25/19, 1:15 PM
I wonder if he's going to try and trick his friends into it too
2/25/19, 12:45 PM
Wow, thank you guys so much! Especially means a lot to hear kind words from Big Names like AbsMan420 (who I've been reading since O'Melissokomos was a thing), M. Greene, and Cris Kane (loved Davey & the Malltarts), but all comments highly appreciated - I was a very nervous first-time poster & y'all are mad welcoming. To be clear, I have written regular stuff before, but never attempted anything erotic. Stand by for my first ever attempt at a sex scene. apologies to the guy who doesn't like hair, it's only downhill from here.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 11:09 AM
you're a natural. please continue.
lloyd311@aol.com
2/25/19, 11:06 AM
Super hot! Just, all of it. Can't wait for more. Wow... LLOYD
2/25/19, 10:17 AM
yeah keep it its a continuation of the story Victor's uniform needs to change to the new security firms leather uniform