Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/25/19, 8:55 PM
The raw human lust in this was just, mmmm. Again, awesome work.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 7:31 PM
great writing bro. keep it up, you got a great eye and a great voice
Anonymous
2/25/19, 7:10 PM
As you usual. A classic in the making.
2/25/19, 6:30 PM
Again, wonderful. I loved the repeating "I could have said"-motif. Good attention to detail, smooth background delivery, great pacing.
2/25/19, 5:46 PM
Although not literally an illustration of this story, my recent photomanipulation sequence at DeviantArt is definitely connected to the concept of this story thematically: [True Colors](http://fav.me/dcyw2c0) Feel free to check out my other [muscle-growth sequences](https://www.deviantart.com/criskane/gallery/63869464/Muscle-Growth-Images-and-Comics). I’ve done a couple of twinkification images too: [here](http://fav.me/dc9bk0r) and [here](http://fav.me/dcaizhd) Maybe they’ll inspire some story ideas.
2/25/19, 5:34 PM
More stellar writing, highly descriptive with humor and great attention to detail (such as slamming against every button in the elevator). I have no doubt that I'd enjoy reading your less salacious material just as much.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:55 PM
Pretty good. I liked your original. Look forward to next chapter
Martin
2/25/19, 4:09 PM
I've added "Pt. 2" to the name of this second part of your story. It's better to give each chapter a separate name. It can be anything (not just a numbering), as long as each chapter is named differently.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 3:47 PM
This is so insanely sexy.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 1:50 PM
Oh wow! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks for writing!