Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:14 AM
amazing story. cannot wait to read the next chapter
leedsdevil
2/25/19, 2:02 AM
Excellent beginning of the story and so well written, as has been noted already. Thank you. I look forward to this story and more!
2/25/19, 1:57 AM
Well done - an excellent start - looking forward to part 2...
Jamie
2/25/19, 1:10 AM
sooo...... darius gets the same degrading transformation as the other students and then this dean reacts with : "What in the devil’s name has that idiot Dalton done to him" ? i dont see how making a stereotype out of white students into whitetrash is any worse as what has been done to darius...... huge turn off for me.... but ! great story and well written really enjoyed it :)
Anonymous
2/25/19, 12:41 AM
This is really, really good. Please write more!!
2/24/19, 11:32 PM
It's a beautiful set-up -- I can't wait for the next chapter! Very well written -- a lot of information given to us in a very entertaining narrative. Well done! Keep it up!
Martin
2/24/19, 10:59 PM
This is not the first story you ever wrote, is it? It's so well written, that I can't believe that you've never written anything before. Anyway, I'm really looking forward for what you've got planned out for us!
Dec 25, 2018
Anonymous
2/24/19, 6:04 PM
damn thats hot
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 3:57 PM
Oh Daddy!!!! A++
Boston Satyr
2/24/19, 2:47 PM
love the pacing of the story, & how the magic/mind control is playing itself out.