Recent Comments

tomozco
2/26/19, 1:02 AM
This is interesting! Seems a bit different from the first part you had previously, but it's equally hot showing the different ways The Organization is acquiring its men. Keep up your usual god work, Hypnothrill! Looking forward to what happens next with Walter and this group of men...or the previous characters as well!
Mdlftr
2/26/19, 12:56 AM
OMG - funny and sexy! Adam is amazingly well drawn - I can almost see and SMELL him, from the vivid way you've written this party scene. BRAVO!
Anonymous
2/26/19, 12:09 AM
I loved the original, this is good.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 11:47 PM
love this story, nice low simmer. hope it works out for them
Martin
2/25/19, 11:21 PM
Short but intense. The transformation was a bit too quick for my taste. But otherwise exactly my cup of tea.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 11:10 PM
...fuck.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/25/19, 9:37 PM
How did I miss that on my 18th birthday?
zacthefac76@gmail.com
2/25/19, 9:33 PM
I've beat off to this story so many times, I think if a dude came up to me and said "Bro, I own your ass" that I would fall into a trance just like Eric.
2/25/19, 9:21 PM
I wish all the first time writers were like you. You obviously took time to craft a story, think it through, develop it, and then craft it into a narrative that flowed in readable English, with usage and syntax. I know this is an 'escape site', but it still needs creative writing by creative minds. Keep writing. I'll read it.
LongtimeFan
2/25/19, 9:17 PM
INCREDIBLE! The sex scene was achingly hot (from the elevator to the post-coital bliss), the humor was spot on (I lost it at "Season one Kurt Hummel...God, I hate that show), the description of Adam's body was like a painting--a very sexy painting--and I absolutely LOVE that you made consent such a huge part of Adam's sex drive. But most of all, I love how REAL the whole thing seemed. It was the "don't mention the Lion King" that proved to me you're a master--my own thoughts spin wildly during sex, so to see a character do that, instead of acting like a robot, made me realize your skill. Well done... :)