Recent Comments

Hawke
2/25/19, 7:41 AM
A curious and clever piece of writing. You've got my attention.
LongtimeFan
2/25/19, 7:18 AM
Count me among those who love this story! Amazing characterization, excellent writing, and a flirting scene with such palpable tension I could FEEL it. Plus I love that it's the meddling mom who's using magic this time around...it speaks to the goodhearted humor that permeates the whole work. Excellent job! :D
Anonymous
2/25/19, 7:00 AM
wow this was awesome!
2/25/19, 6:44 AM
Joining the choir here: This is excellent. The narrator's humorous tone is wonderful and the flow is very, very good.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
2/25/19, 6:18 AM
It's true. Being dumb is great. Being dumb is also a turn on! So is having a man piss directly down your throat then sucking him off! Damned hot!
OwnerLordandMaster
2/25/19, 5:36 AM
Taking your word that this might well be the first chapter of your very first story, you are, already, my favorite author.... at this time. Bring on chapter 2!
2/25/19, 5:24 AM
As others have said, extremely well written. Very much looking forward to where you go from here.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:52 AM
Soooo hot already!! Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:24 AM
It's great to see such a talented new writer here! The characterization was so sincere and vivid, I can't wait to see where you take this.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:14 AM
amazing story. cannot wait to read the next chapter