Recent Comments

Martin
2/24/19, 10:59 PM
This is not the first story you ever wrote, is it? It's so well written, that I can't believe that you've never written anything before. Anyway, I'm really looking forward for what you've got planned out for us!
Dec 25, 2018
Anonymous
2/24/19, 6:04 PM
damn thats hot
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 3:57 PM
Oh Daddy!!!! A++
Boston Satyr
2/24/19, 2:47 PM
love the pacing of the story, & how the magic/mind control is playing itself out.
Anonymous
2/24/19, 12:58 PM
this needs to be continued, please continue this!!
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 12:26 PM
my favorite. adding more details like their school life, how they had invented jock juice, or the role of Coach would make it hotter and better.
H
2/24/19, 8:51 AM
Wow, that was a plot twist! If anything I thought Darry was going to end up being turned white to fit in to the trailer park more.
Martin
2/24/19, 8:51 AM
> I just realised that this chapter had no mind control in it at all, besides the initial impetus from Chapter 1. If you like I can get Martin to delete it and we’ll move straight on to Chapter 6. I would only delete it if you explicitly ask me to. I don't see any reason though. The rules about mind-control and gay sex apply to a series as a whole, not to each individual chapter. Sometimes a chapter is just a build-up, background etc. or maybe simply fun to read. This chapter seems to be very well received, just like all the others. So please don't hold back, your output is more than welcome (is it just me, or does this sound a bit ambiguous? 😜)
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 8:48 AM
like it