Recent Comments

Hawke
2/25/19, 7:59 AM
We need to accept this story for what it is on the surface, rather than reading into the mind of the author. From what I've read, he does not need out help.
Hawke
2/25/19, 7:41 AM
A curious and clever piece of writing. You've got my attention.
LongtimeFan
2/25/19, 7:18 AM
Count me among those who love this story! Amazing characterization, excellent writing, and a flirting scene with such palpable tension I could FEEL it. Plus I love that it's the meddling mom who's using magic this time around...it speaks to the goodhearted humor that permeates the whole work. Excellent job! :D
Anonymous
2/25/19, 7:00 AM
wow this was awesome!
2/25/19, 6:44 AM
Joining the choir here: This is excellent. The narrator's humorous tone is wonderful and the flow is very, very good.
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
2/25/19, 6:18 AM
It's true. Being dumb is great. Being dumb is also a turn on! So is having a man piss directly down your throat then sucking him off! Damned hot!
OwnerLordandMaster
2/25/19, 5:36 AM
Taking your word that this might well be the first chapter of your very first story, you are, already, my favorite author.... at this time. Bring on chapter 2!
2/25/19, 5:24 AM
As others have said, extremely well written. Very much looking forward to where you go from here.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:52 AM
Soooo hot already!! Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:24 AM
It's great to see such a talented new writer here! The characterization was so sincere and vivid, I can't wait to see where you take this.