Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/28/24, 10:05 PM
Loved the necklace stuff. I just think the contents and mystery of the handbook may be too limited when everything clearly points to gay sex and otherwise the characters are already dedicated sporty types. It feels like the characters are having the same few minor revelations dawning on them eight times a day.

10/28/24, 10:26 PM
@Anonymous I hear you. It is supposed to represent how much it takes to convert them. But I 100 get it. Thanks for commenting!
10/27/24, 2:41 AM
Oh it's getting good!

10/28/24, 9:08 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I hope the slow build works for people... I worry I spend too much time giving readers a picture of what the characters are like.

10/28/24, 10:20 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Slow burn is fine. More time to know the characters.
Hypno-boy
10/28/24, 10:09 PM
If you are really opposed to the ai generated photos, let me know and I'll stop doing them. For now, I think they're a fun way for you guys to get to see the characters as I do.
Anonymous
10/28/24, 9:46 PM
Wow. Worth the wait!

10/28/24, 9:49 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! Glad someone is enjoying it.
10/28/24, 9:29 AM
Totally amped for the next chapter!

10/28/24, 9:10 PM
@[TomMidnight](/user/show/13578) Published today! I'm going to try to squeeze out chapter 3 by the end of the contest.
10/27/24, 10:52 PM
Holy crap! So happy to see a new story from you. I was not expecting that. I loved it! Felt like a slow burn that was nice and long and ended with the start of some pay off. I loved the ending where Ty now has a kink of being dommed by Vince. I loved their obliviousness. I loved the use of the movie playing constantly in the background narrating the story to them and us and them not noticing. I am very excited to see a bunch of only fans muscle studs eager to suck Vince’s dick and Ty more eager to do whatever Vince tells him to. Ty in a collar with a leash for Vince sounds really hot. Can’t wait to read more.

10/28/24, 9:10 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) Thanks! The movie was a tricky idea to work in, but I think it worked better than my initial idea to have a mini-prologue setting up the story. The OnlyFans dick sucking will be in chapter 3!
10/27/24, 4:12 AM
Muscled goth dom? Slow burn reality change himbofication? Only chapter 1 and we’ve already got a delightful mishmash of kinks 🥰

10/28/24, 9:08 PM
@[Catalust](/user/show/920370) I do take a kitchen sink (kitchen kink?) approach to throwing lots of ideas into stories...
10/26/24, 3:04 PM
One of my favorite authors and you’ve done it yet again! Can’t wait to read the rest!

10/28/24, 9:06 PM
@[cheekyjockboy](/user/show/908783) Thanks! Next chapter is out today.
Anonymous
10/26/24, 1:18 PM
Very hot start. Love how things are ramping up with both guys becoming the other’s fantasy without fully being aware of it.

10/28/24, 9:06 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! I never quite know what level of awareness I like best in reality shifting stories. Lots of variations of obliviousness/awareness are hot to me.
10/28/24, 8:46 PM
Here's the last of my submissions for the Halloween contest. As usual, if you have any feedback on this story, or any of the previous ones, I'll be happy to hear your thoughts!