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OwnerLordandMaster
2/25/19, 5:36 AM
Taking your word that this might well be the first chapter of your very first story, you are, already, my favorite author.... at this time. Bring on chapter 2!
2/25/19, 5:24 AM
As others have said, extremely well written. Very much looking forward to where you go from here.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:52 AM
Soooo hot already!! Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:24 AM
It's great to see such a talented new writer here! The characterization was so sincere and vivid, I can't wait to see where you take this.
Anonymous
2/25/19, 4:14 AM
amazing story. cannot wait to read the next chapter
leedsdevil
2/25/19, 2:02 AM
Excellent beginning of the story and so well written, as has been noted already. Thank you. I look forward to this story and more!
2/25/19, 1:57 AM
Well done - an excellent start - looking forward to part 2...
Jamie
2/25/19, 1:10 AM
sooo...... darius gets the same degrading transformation as the other students and then this dean reacts with : "What in the devil’s name has that idiot Dalton done to him" ? i dont see how making a stereotype out of white students into whitetrash is any worse as what has been done to darius...... huge turn off for me.... but ! great story and well written really enjoyed it :)
Anonymous
2/25/19, 12:41 AM
This is really, really good. Please write more!!
2/24/19, 11:32 PM
It's a beautiful set-up -- I can't wait for the next chapter! Very well written -- a lot of information given to us in a very entertaining narrative. Well done! Keep it up!