Recent Comments

Martin
2/24/19, 8:51 AM
> I just realised that this chapter had no mind control in it at all, besides the initial impetus from Chapter 1. If you like I can get Martin to delete it and we’ll move straight on to Chapter 6. I would only delete it if you explicitly ask me to. I don't see any reason though. The rules about mind-control and gay sex apply to a series as a whole, not to each individual chapter. Sometimes a chapter is just a build-up, background etc. or maybe simply fun to read. This chapter seems to be very well received, just like all the others. So please don't hold back, your output is more than welcome (is it just me, or does this sound a bit ambiguous? 😜)
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 8:48 AM
like it
Anonymous
2/24/19, 8:30 AM
"it was for Josh's own good" he said. As if anyone would be dumb enough to believe that. He publicity humiliated him and sent him to jail, ruined his life, for what? For his mistake. No. For that uncle's selfish, perverted need. And you call yourself his uncle? May him rot in hell.
Anonymous
2/24/19, 7:35 AM
LOVE it. Keep it going PLEASE.
longingslave
2/24/19, 6:51 AM
Loved the twist and the how the tables have turned. Particular nice touch is how Axel got rewarded for his amicability as well. This story was absolutely a refreshing experience for me. Well done!
2/24/19, 4:59 AM
I just realised that this chapter had no mind control in it at all, besides the initial impetus from Chapter 1. If you like I can get Martin to delete it and we'll move straight on to Chapter 6.
2/24/19, 4:44 AM
I love seeing the changes in Steve. Let all the suggestions commented above be in an indication of how hot this story was and how strongly it's bringing in its readers.
ray8222@mac.com
2/24/19, 2:24 AM
More please....
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 1:52 AM
At least, it's great that you made some efforts to improve and the story is becoming better; it would be greater if you continue this story ; )
Feb 23, 2019
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/23/19, 9:44 PM
Loved it so much, especially cup transforming into a football helmet & jock strap that dissolved in his mouth. I want that treatment for me! Great jock job.