Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/25/19, 12:41 AM
This is really, really good. Please write more!!
2/24/19, 11:32 PM
It's a beautiful set-up -- I can't wait for the next chapter! Very well written -- a lot of information given to us in a very entertaining narrative. Well done! Keep it up!
Martin
2/24/19, 10:59 PM
This is not the first story you ever wrote, is it? It's so well written, that I can't believe that you've never written anything before. Anyway, I'm really looking forward for what you've got planned out for us!
Dec 25, 2018
Anonymous
2/24/19, 6:04 PM
damn thats hot
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 3:57 PM
Oh Daddy!!!! A++
Boston Satyr
2/24/19, 2:47 PM
love the pacing of the story, & how the magic/mind control is playing itself out.
Anonymous
2/24/19, 12:58 PM
this needs to be continued, please continue this!!
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 12:26 PM
my favorite. adding more details like their school life, how they had invented jock juice, or the role of Coach would make it hotter and better.
H
2/24/19, 8:51 AM
Wow, that was a plot twist! If anything I thought Darry was going to end up being turned white to fit in to the trailer park more.