Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/23/19, 9:35 PM
I agree with Tim make some normal good guy in an evil genius who loves to torment people. Maybe even corrupt his corrupter to make him his pet.
tiny tim
2/23/19, 9:29 PM
Here's Hoping that at sometime in the future you'll consider writing a 'transformation' story where a 'normal', or all american-type family [for some reason] is forced [perhaps by court-order], to visit a Therapist who is actually an 'evil' scientific genus...& He slowly through a series of hypnotic & chemical sessions [week by week] totally changes each of their past memories, both individually & collectively, studying & slowly reinforcing , week by week, how these new implanted early false memories now affect their current behavior...until they have become the totally corrupt , sexually dysfunctional people he enjoys creating......Thanks for considering this, Tim...
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/23/19, 9:00 PM
like to see where this goes more
Feb 23, 2019
2/23/19, 6:51 PM
I forgot to mention at the start of this story that this was a request (which is why its similar to Jock fun). I usually wouldn't release a story with a similar theme so close to another one.
2/23/19, 6:51 PM
You didn't pressurise me Orc-br; I'm just glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for your support.
Anonymous
2/23/19, 6:42 PM
aww poor em ☹
Orc-br
2/23/19, 5:33 PM
Loved it !! Thank you very much! Sorry to have pressured you. It's was just a way to show that I cared.
tiny tim
2/23/19, 4:30 PM
Enjoyed the story...
Anonymous
2/23/19, 3:27 PM
It was well written and hot until the enslavement and degradation of Darius. I think you handled his salvation well but to leave his boyhood friends racist seems like a disservice. They could have been saved as well but remain full blown piggies. especially since one was gay already you could have made him a preferred boyfriend to Darrius. It's the first story of yours I was disturbed by
David S
2/23/19, 2:12 PM
Now THAT was a plot twist! I was wondering where you were going with this, and I love where it went. Thank you for your great writing!