Recent Comments

tiny tim
2/22/19, 5:23 PM
Wow...couldn't wait for this new chapter..I'm glad your 'taking your time' in developing Darius TRANSFORMATION !!! Slow & steady !! Here's hoping you decide to give Darry some 'new' memories to go with his more 'Docile' & 'Servile' developing nature...Also instead of just a tiny 'hint', how about showing Josh & Vince's developing Skinhead racism [???], for example calling Darry,.. 'BOY', etc.///Perhaps Darry could also slowly start having feeling's of Inferiority???.... Also, I wish you'd consider backtracking a little and showing how Dalton developed the boy's desire to become Cocksuckers & 'piss lovers', etc...Would also love to see Darry become a total Boot Lover & Boot Licker >???......Thanks for taking these humble suggestions under consideration.....Tim
Anonymous
2/22/19, 3:22 PM
Rozza!! THANKS A LOT!!! I had thought it would end with part 2 and was surprised to see the third chapter : )
Feb 18, 2019
Anonymous
2/22/19, 5:15 AM
Ditto, on the last comment. Incredible imagination.
Anonymous
2/22/19, 5:13 AM
Really hot! Loved it!!!
Nickolas gautier-ambrosio
2/22/19, 4:31 AM
amazing story loved it all the way to the end
Anonymous
2/22/19, 4:13 AM
I've always loved this story, hope you choose to continue it now! The setup is done but lots more can come up with these cops.
Anonymous
2/22/19, 4:11 AM
Great story so far, loving the way it's going. I agree with above post, Steve should find that cop again and make him do more. Maybe bring Victor and train them both.
dredlifter
2/22/19, 3:55 AM
This is a great story! Very detailed and developed. I love the mystery unfolding...as well as the muscle growth and role reverals, haha! Keep it coming!
2/22/19, 3:05 AM
@Hyphap, I know what you mean about consequences sometimes removing the arousal... I also find it a bit hard to get off to stories that end 'and then their life was completely ruined and they were really sad.' For me the fantasy is often, 'what if there were no serious/scary negative consequences to being completely controlled by another person/having sex all the time/flaking on responsibilities/getting dumber?' My approach will be basically 'when god opens a door he closes a window' in that any negative consequences will likely be experienced as positive opportunities by our protagonist. So like tbh, failing a class sounds like a fantastic chance to discover a new way to get good grades without those pesky cram sessions and stressful exams ;) and don't worry folks, more chapters soon enough...
2/22/19, 2:37 AM
if you want my opinion, the story is so hot, the final character is perfect, I want be any similar in the real life, but, the keyword "body swap" not is good, in a body swap, two peoples swap bodies, here is more about mind control or transformation but transformation not is correct in the most literal context, I read this seach a body swap, in this is a deception, but the story is so hot, the write is good, the idea is perfect, continue here, this story can be a classic. specially for a person as me, what search a how become in a dumb bodybuilder.