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Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 8:48 AM
like it
Anonymous
2/24/19, 8:30 AM
"it was for Josh's own good" he said. As if anyone would be dumb enough to believe that. He publicity humiliated him and sent him to jail, ruined his life, for what? For his mistake. No. For that uncle's selfish, perverted need. And you call yourself his uncle? May him rot in hell.
Anonymous
2/24/19, 7:35 AM
LOVE it. Keep it going PLEASE.
longingslave
2/24/19, 6:51 AM
Loved the twist and the how the tables have turned. Particular nice touch is how Axel got rewarded for his amicability as well. This story was absolutely a refreshing experience for me. Well done!
2/24/19, 4:59 AM
I just realised that this chapter had no mind control in it at all, besides the initial impetus from Chapter 1. If you like I can get Martin to delete it and we'll move straight on to Chapter 6.
2/24/19, 4:44 AM
I love seeing the changes in Steve. Let all the suggestions commented above be in an indication of how hot this story was and how strongly it's bringing in its readers.
ray8222@mac.com
2/24/19, 2:24 AM
More please....
Feb 23, 2019
Anonymous
2/24/19, 1:52 AM
At least, it's great that you made some efforts to improve and the story is becoming better; it would be greater if you continue this story ; )
Feb 23, 2019
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/23/19, 9:44 PM
Loved it so much, especially cup transforming into a football helmet & jock strap that dissolved in his mouth. I want that treatment for me! Great jock job.
tiny tim
2/23/19, 9:41 PM
Ever consider a story-line where a corrupt police psychiatrist using hypnotism & chemical's starts changing all the 'good', honest cops in the squad into the totally super-manly,totally 'corrupt' & sex obsessed cruel cop's? Perhaps by changing their past memories & therefore their current behavior ???