Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/22/19, 4:13 AM
I've always loved this story, hope you choose to continue it now! The setup is done but lots more can come up with these cops.
Anonymous
2/22/19, 4:11 AM
Great story so far, loving the way it's going. I agree with above post, Steve should find that cop again and make him do more. Maybe bring Victor and train them both.
dredlifter
2/22/19, 3:55 AM
This is a great story! Very detailed and developed. I love the mystery unfolding...as well as the muscle growth and role reverals, haha! Keep it coming!
2/22/19, 3:05 AM
@Hyphap, I know what you mean about consequences sometimes removing the arousal... I also find it a bit hard to get off to stories that end 'and then their life was completely ruined and they were really sad.' For me the fantasy is often, 'what if there were no serious/scary negative consequences to being completely controlled by another person/having sex all the time/flaking on responsibilities/getting dumber?' My approach will be basically 'when god opens a door he closes a window' in that any negative consequences will likely be experienced as positive opportunities by our protagonist. So like tbh, failing a class sounds like a fantastic chance to discover a new way to get good grades without those pesky cram sessions and stressful exams ;) and don't worry folks, more chapters soon enough...
2/22/19, 2:37 AM
if you want my opinion, the story is so hot, the final character is perfect, I want be any similar in the real life, but, the keyword "body swap" not is good, in a body swap, two peoples swap bodies, here is more about mind control or transformation but transformation not is correct in the most literal context, I read this seach a body swap, in this is a deception, but the story is so hot, the write is good, the idea is perfect, continue here, this story can be a classic. specially for a person as me, what search a how become in a dumb bodybuilder.
BillShaw
2/22/19, 2:21 AM
can't wait foor next part shame it never happens at hotels i stay at
Anonymous
2/22/19, 1:59 AM
Hope you continue the story soon! Been reading since the beginning and can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
longingslave
2/22/19, 1:23 AM
M.Greene you may be my new favorite author here and I would even say you have joined the ranks of rather provocative similarly twisted Mr Wesley Bracken (in my mind that's a very high compliment if it wasn't clear). I am absolutely have to catch up on all of your works from before. How I missed these is just beyond me. Many thanks!
Rozza22365
2/22/19, 1:00 AM
Hey guys. So I'm liking most of the feedback I'm getting. I see this is a popular series and I must admit I do enjoy writing it. I have another story planned for this series that will add more depth to Coach and add other sinister characters. Thanks, Rozza
Anonymous
2/22/19, 12:30 AM
hope to learn more about Coach !!