Recent Comments

2/22/19, 2:37 AM
if you want my opinion, the story is so hot, the final character is perfect, I want be any similar in the real life, but, the keyword "body swap" not is good, in a body swap, two peoples swap bodies, here is more about mind control or transformation but transformation not is correct in the most literal context, I read this seach a body swap, in this is a deception, but the story is so hot, the write is good, the idea is perfect, continue here, this story can be a classic. specially for a person as me, what search a how become in a dumb bodybuilder.
BillShaw
2/22/19, 2:21 AM
can't wait foor next part shame it never happens at hotels i stay at
Anonymous
2/22/19, 1:59 AM
Hope you continue the story soon! Been reading since the beginning and can't wait until the next chapter comes out.
longingslave
2/22/19, 1:23 AM
M.Greene you may be my new favorite author here and I would even say you have joined the ranks of rather provocative similarly twisted Mr Wesley Bracken (in my mind that's a very high compliment if it wasn't clear). I am absolutely have to catch up on all of your works from before. How I missed these is just beyond me. Many thanks!
Rozza22365
2/22/19, 1:00 AM
Hey guys. So I'm liking most of the feedback I'm getting. I see this is a popular series and I must admit I do enjoy writing it. I have another story planned for this series that will add more depth to Coach and add other sinister characters. Thanks, Rozza
Anonymous
2/22/19, 12:30 AM
hope to learn more about Coach !!
Anonymous
2/22/19, 12:11 AM
Checking everyday for the sequels to this. . . Can't wait!
Anonymous
2/22/19, 12:09 AM
it could be a much longer series with so many potentials and possibilities. appreciate you share this one with us. i really love the concept and where it has gone. also wish you could have spent more paragraphs to show us each transformation and interactions among jocks. it looked too rushed.
AlexW
2/21/19, 11:14 PM
Love the stroy for the most part more filth skinhead brother the slave thing is a bit short side I rather have it a bit more long lasting sure with him on the top but the other his "willing" followers and filth skinhead cum dumps I really hope there will be more boy toruend into filth skinhead brother and dummed down some worshiping of the Boss's feet after a long day on the gabage toor in his well worn sweaty boots
Anonymous
2/21/19, 10:58 PM
Truly horrifying descriptions of destruction