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Anonymous
2/21/19, 10:43 AM
look forward to the next chaper
Anonymous
2/21/19, 8:53 AM
Awesome idea. How about one part following this where you narrate Victor's point of view of this part? How his new mind made him get a haircut? Would love to read about that.
2/21/19, 8:47 AM
Thanks for that, Martin. The way you run this site is so excellent...
Martin
2/21/19, 8:35 AM
M.Greene, I hear you, but I'm willing to stand the heat that this would cause. Elan Musk wrote stories where blacks are dominated by white guys, even "enslaved" by dumbing them down. Now, Elan is "excused", because he himself is black. Isn't he? I don't buy that, though. All kinds of hypnotism with the goal of dominating, controlling and abusing a person is equally questionable - in reality. This site is full of that, **because it's just a fantasy**. So, if you'd like to write a story where a black guy is enslaved by a white one, go for it - the only condition is that the background has to be purely sexual and that there's no implication that his skin color makes the guy inferior or different in any other way than his looks.
2/21/19, 7:48 AM
I’m glad you’re enjoying the story tiny tim. It is not possible for me to fully realise your most recent ideas as such a scenario would offend many readers, lead to numerous complaints and might possibly cause problems for this entire site. While it is apparently perfectly acceptable to have dominant black characters enslaving whites, current 'PC' thinking disallows the opposite. There is a discussion thread in the forum called 'Slavery' where I talk in more detail about this particular double standard.
Anonymous
2/21/19, 7:47 AM
i have deff red this before
Anonymous
2/21/19, 6:51 AM
Really clever. I liked it!
Anonymous
2/21/19, 6:49 AM
This was clever and hot! Wish I knew which building it was on the East Side!
Apr 15, 2015
2/21/19, 4:45 AM
Awesome pup story. The battle within with the puppy. Succumbing to the puppy, becoming the puppy. I loved it!
FWIW
2/21/19, 4:04 AM
I think it was nicely rendered, I like the screenplay style, always love how you treat sex & muscles together, and the pacing was just right for me. Came right before the end.