Recent Comments

TheD
2/21/19, 5:15 PM
This is such a terrific opener! Also, if *you're* currently living in Portland, I am too. I'd love to buy you a cup of coffee or a nice local, handcrafted, small-batch, ethically-sourced, all-organic, artisanal quintuple-IPA and talk story ideas.
Anonymous
2/21/19, 3:27 PM
Jock Fun became Jock Fun 1; it got me thrilled : )
Anonymous
2/21/19, 2:22 PM
This is getting hotter with all these humiliating and dominating scenes. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Chronos
2/21/19, 1:36 PM
This story seems to be really straightforward in its nerd to jock trope. There was no resistance or false sense of security or slow burn and it all goes to jock too fast that it just kills my arousal. I would be nice and say Good job nice writing but I decided to be mean today. Try better next time.
Anonymous
2/21/19, 12:11 PM
Very well written, very detailed! I love the description of the evaluation and prep process. I'd love to hear about the effects in coming chapers - the masculinization, etc.
Orc-br
2/21/19, 11:43 AM
I am "latino" myself and I enjoy to read stories about intelligent and sucessful Latinos being turned into stereotypical illegal labourers or thuggish cholos. Sometimes its like white people being turned into skinhead, it's a bit of a kink being turned into stereotypes. Sometimes I feel like there is a huge antenna somewhere emitting mindcontrol signals so people conform to some racial stereotypes, and some people only feel the pull to fantasize about it, but it happens.
Anonymous
2/21/19, 10:43 AM
look forward to the next chaper
Anonymous
2/21/19, 8:53 AM
Awesome idea. How about one part following this where you narrate Victor's point of view of this part? How his new mind made him get a haircut? Would love to read about that.
2/21/19, 8:47 AM
Thanks for that, Martin. The way you run this site is so excellent...
Martin
2/21/19, 8:35 AM
M.Greene, I hear you, but I'm willing to stand the heat that this would cause. Elan Musk wrote stories where blacks are dominated by white guys, even "enslaved" by dumbing them down. Now, Elan is "excused", because he himself is black. Isn't he? I don't buy that, though. All kinds of hypnotism with the goal of dominating, controlling and abusing a person is equally questionable - in reality. This site is full of that, **because it's just a fantasy**. So, if you'd like to write a story where a black guy is enslaved by a white one, go for it - the only condition is that the background has to be purely sexual and that there's no implication that his skin color makes the guy inferior or different in any other way than his looks.