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Anonymous
2/21/19, 6:28 PM
Very hot. Would love to see Steve find a uniformed officer and enslave him. Wear the cop uniform while he dominates Victor and the cop. Maybe use the cop uniform and car to go after other hot guys to dominate. Steve would be picking up attitudes and abilities of each person he alters. Make Victor all the more inferior seeing Steve in police uniform abusing him.
tiny tim
2/21/19, 5:48 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful response..O>K> M.Greene, Martin has [more or less] given you permission....Are you going to GO FOR IT ???? I hope so, if not in this story, in a future one...Also, I love the skinhead angle, but would like to see more of the brutal & 'racist' attitude that this suggest's....IT WAS ESP. 'HOT' WHEN JOSH HAD NO MEMORY OF HIS LIFELONG FRIEND DARIOUS...Would love to read more about his new 'implanted' memories...It is allright to be un-P.C. when dealing with sexual/racial stereotypes, as long as its in the context of a fictional erotic story .....Thank's
TheD
2/21/19, 5:15 PM
This is such a terrific opener! Also, if *you're* currently living in Portland, I am too. I'd love to buy you a cup of coffee or a nice local, handcrafted, small-batch, ethically-sourced, all-organic, artisanal quintuple-IPA and talk story ideas.
Anonymous
2/21/19, 3:27 PM
Jock Fun became Jock Fun 1; it got me thrilled : )
Anonymous
2/21/19, 2:22 PM
This is getting hotter with all these humiliating and dominating scenes. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Chronos
2/21/19, 1:36 PM
This story seems to be really straightforward in its nerd to jock trope. There was no resistance or false sense of security or slow burn and it all goes to jock too fast that it just kills my arousal. I would be nice and say Good job nice writing but I decided to be mean today. Try better next time.
Anonymous
2/21/19, 12:11 PM
Very well written, very detailed! I love the description of the evaluation and prep process. I'd love to hear about the effects in coming chapers - the masculinization, etc.
Orc-br
2/21/19, 11:43 AM
I am "latino" myself and I enjoy to read stories about intelligent and sucessful Latinos being turned into stereotypical illegal labourers or thuggish cholos. Sometimes its like white people being turned into skinhead, it's a bit of a kink being turned into stereotypes. Sometimes I feel like there is a huge antenna somewhere emitting mindcontrol signals so people conform to some racial stereotypes, and some people only feel the pull to fantasize about it, but it happens.
Anonymous
2/21/19, 10:43 AM
look forward to the next chaper
Anonymous
2/21/19, 8:53 AM
Awesome idea. How about one part following this where you narrate Victor's point of view of this part? How his new mind made him get a haircut? Would love to read about that.