Recent Comments

10/29/24, 8:05 AM
Thanks so much for a very hot hypnosis story. I thought the pace of the story and the progression of the seduction was good, given Jamie's apparent predilection to being hypnotized, and the doctor taking every opportunity to deepen Jamie's trance. Like the others though, the mixed up male/female pronouns, misplaced gender-oriented nouns like Domme instead of Dom, and the sudden introduction of MissTique in this last chapter which you had earlier referred to as a man dressed in rubber all became a major distraction. I thought too that opportunities to make a gay story hotter were missed by using girl clerks on every occasion instead of a hot young men. I am still looking forward to further chapters to see how things develop!
Oct 28, 2024
10/29/24, 3:41 AM
I couldn't finish it all last night before blowing a load but I'm back again this morning for more!

10/29/24, 7:19 AM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Haha that really is the best kind of comment I could get! Definite job satisfaction ๐Ÿ˜† really glad you enjoyed it!
10/29/24, 6:10 AM
This story is fantastic! Fantasies come to life? Sign me up!
Ben
10/29/24, 6:05 AM
Still one of my faves!!!
10/29/24, 5:23 AM
Wow.
10/28/24, 11:47 PM
Love the second chapter! Excited to maybe see Ty in that pink collar that keeps getting foreshadowed ๐Ÿ‘€โค๏ธ
10/26/24, 8:54 PM
Excited to see where this goes!

10/28/24, 9:07 PM
@[Botbot](/user/show/10010276) Thanks! Next chapter just published today.

10/28/24, 11:32 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Oh awesome, thanks for the heads up! Excited to continue
10/28/24, 10:37 PM
Iโ€™d love to see Vinceโ€™s fantasy involve becoming brothers ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
10/28/24, 10:27 PM
More subtle shifts to reality. Great work.
Anonymous
10/28/24, 10:05 PM
Loved the necklace stuff. I just think the contents and mystery of the handbook may be too limited when everything clearly points to gay sex and otherwise the characters are already dedicated sporty types. It feels like the characters are having the same few minor revelations dawning on them eight times a day.

10/28/24, 10:26 PM
@Anonymous I hear you. It is supposed to represent how much it takes to convert them. But I 100 get it. Thanks for commenting!