Recent Comments

2/17/19, 2:54 PM
It's a new city called 'Transatlantica'?
2/17/19, 2:20 PM
I'm loving the mental transformations in this one! My one nitpick is that there's a strange mix of US redneck and UK skinhead signifiers; I think the story's supposed to be taking place in the US, but it doesn't feel like an American city at all.
Anonymous
2/17/19, 1:13 PM
Thanks Man, I love all that you write
Martin
2/17/19, 11:00 AM
So impatient, Mr. Anonymous :)
Anonymous
2/17/19, 10:30 AM
That's it?
Anonymous
2/17/19, 10:11 AM
It looks like Lord Thaz is also trying to brainwash/enslave our plucky young heroes? interesting
Anonymous
2/17/19, 7:34 AM
like it very much, keep the transformation going.
rubaluva
2/17/19, 6:01 AM
Interesting how polarising the last two sentences have become in this day and age. On the one hand it could be argued that this is reinforcing a specific viewpoint on Arab, African and Muslim men, i.e. this is racist. On the other hand, but not allowing it, this also is enforcing a specific viewpoint, i.e. this is preventing free speech.
rubaluva
2/17/19, 5:49 AM
Another chapter or two would be great! If you do, I hope Thomas keeps his awareness. This would help provide depth and interest in future chapters.
2/17/19, 4:42 AM
Very creative. Hot story. Well done. And agreement on the facial hair comments.