Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/15/19, 9:08 PM
Maybe for the next chapter if there is a next chapter - have Sven take control the mind of Christain's father and forcing father & son to have HOT depraved incest sex! it would be even hotter to have them do this while still dressed in their fine expensive business suits... have them soil their expensive tailored outfits and make complete fool of themselves. In the process further humiliating Christain and his father... Ultimately turn them both into submissive cock-hungry sluts for their company entire board to sexually degrade and abuse everyday!! THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY! I LOVED IT! YOUR EFFORTS ARE VERY MUCH APPRECIATED!
Anonymous
2/15/19, 9:06 PM
fantastic, take him deep, get him to work out, leather and lycra, tight jeans, maybe his friends fall under as well?
Anonymous
2/15/19, 1:46 PM
you have part 3 so hope to see it soon ;)
Anonymous
2/15/19, 1:34 PM
yes! this is going so well love the slow burn
Hypno_TPE_Master
2/15/19, 12:25 PM
So, hot. Part 2 was also incredibly hot. I had to come back and add a comment because of how well this multi part story is going.
Hypno_TPE_Master
2/15/19, 12:22 PM
I give almost every story on here a chance. Some I can finish, some I can't, and some I love. This is definitely one of my favourites in recent memory, if not all time. I love that it is a multi part series too. Your cake pops story was also great, but this is soooo great. I look forward to more chapters and only wish that you had more published already.
Anonymous
2/15/19, 9:25 AM
this is really great stuff, some of the best thats been posted here in awhile.
South Bend Bama Fan.
2/15/19, 8:52 AM
Wow a great idea. Love that the boys lost their gay virginity while ND lost the game.
2/15/19, 7:41 AM
I'm a recent visitor here after "death of tumblr" and I've had the pleasure to read many of your stories here. (*Catalyst* is a favorite.) I wish I would have found you sooner. Keep it up!!! I've liked most of your stories here especially when they have a black race change or interracial aspect to them and I've gone on to read most of yours. I know this was originally intended to be wider in scope. I feel Curtis Mavour needed more development in the story or that original Richard needed a slower descent into slutdom and maybe that was part of the original plans. This one reminded me a bit of the *Enemy Within* in terms of setting. Perhaps with the cause of the change in this story being controlled by an vengeful omnipotent being it was good to avoid so much deux ex machina and I think you tease about in some of the text. (In contrast the *Lucky Jinx* story where the main character is hands on with his use... even being questioned by the omnipotent beings about going too far.) As another commenter mentioned elsewhere, perhaps something in New Orleans.
Mike
2/15/19, 6:59 AM
Very hot. Thank you