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Hypno_TPE_Master
2/15/19, 12:25 PM
So, hot. Part 2 was also incredibly hot. I had to come back and add a comment because of how well this multi part story is going.
Hypno_TPE_Master
2/15/19, 12:22 PM
I give almost every story on here a chance. Some I can finish, some I can't, and some I love. This is definitely one of my favourites in recent memory, if not all time. I love that it is a multi part series too. Your cake pops story was also great, but this is soooo great. I look forward to more chapters and only wish that you had more published already.
Anonymous
2/15/19, 9:25 AM
this is really great stuff, some of the best thats been posted here in awhile.
South Bend Bama Fan.
2/15/19, 8:52 AM
Wow a great idea. Love that the boys lost their gay virginity while ND lost the game.
2/15/19, 7:41 AM
I'm a recent visitor here after "death of tumblr" and I've had the pleasure to read many of your stories here. (*Catalyst* is a favorite.) I wish I would have found you sooner. Keep it up!!! I've liked most of your stories here especially when they have a black race change or interracial aspect to them and I've gone on to read most of yours. I know this was originally intended to be wider in scope. I feel Curtis Mavour needed more development in the story or that original Richard needed a slower descent into slutdom and maybe that was part of the original plans. This one reminded me a bit of the *Enemy Within* in terms of setting. Perhaps with the cause of the change in this story being controlled by an vengeful omnipotent being it was good to avoid so much deux ex machina and I think you tease about in some of the text. (In contrast the *Lucky Jinx* story where the main character is hands on with his use... even being questioned by the omnipotent beings about going too far.) As another commenter mentioned elsewhere, perhaps something in New Orleans.
Mike
2/15/19, 6:59 AM
Very hot. Thank you
2/15/19, 4:52 AM
glad u all liked it! 2nd part's done & more to cum after that ;3
2/15/19, 4:49 AM
I think I got dumber and subbier just reading this, amazing writing! love how the changes are delayed by one text
Anonymous
2/15/19, 4:34 AM
Clever, funny and hot!! Love the control aspect.
Anonymous
2/15/19, 4:34 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!