Recent Comments

2/15/19, 12:39 AM
Both characters start out as homophobes.
2/14/19, 11:31 PM
BTW Where does the homophobe tag apply? Zack's just describing / praising Hank's new talents!
2/14/19, 11:26 PM
Martin's right - that was so hot! And also...... Thanks doesn't seem enough, but thank you anyway!
Sep 18, 2012
2/14/19, 11:20 PM
This felt very real. Nice job.
Dec 31, 2011
2/14/19, 11:10 PM
This is a good story -- the struggle to succumb was well done -- I wish it didn't end so quickly.
Martin
2/14/19, 8:48 PM
One of the best hypno scenes from the perspective of the hypnotized boy. Very hot!
Martin
2/14/19, 8:28 PM
Oh MAN... what an incredibly hot fuck scene! Perfect, really! THANK YOU!!!!
Anonymous
2/14/19, 7:28 PM
just like all the others, keep it cuming.
Anonymous
2/14/19, 7:19 PM
love it.
Anonymous
2/14/19, 7:12 PM
You should pay more attention to your verbs. You forget to inflect them and you seem to switch between tenses randomly. For example, "He knows this was the ultimate revenge, take him right here and he couldn’t do anything about it. He suppose Luke will be really angry right now, but when he look at his face, Matt see he was crying like a baby." could go like "He knew this was the ultimate revenge, taking him right there with him unable to do anything about it. He supposed Luke would be furious, but when he looked at his face, Matt saw he was crying like a baby." Head to the forums: there are many people happy to proofread promising stories.