Recent Comments

Feb 3, 2019
2/13/19, 5:12 AM
Excellent job. Was picturing someone I knew a long time ago the whole time I was reading it.
2/13/19, 1:35 AM
I think it also just takes some time for people to write additions, so its too soon to really say that no one adds to them. I got halfway through a first addition before I had to attend to something else (which is totally ok by me, the direction it went in instead is great!), so it may just be a question of patience/timing. I'm certainly enjoying spectating so far
2/12/19, 9:24 PM
Sorry for the duplicate response. I hope community stories just take time in getting used to. It would be great if it catched on. I remember the work you and Rubbrsome did together. That was good.
Anonymous
2/12/19, 7:57 PM
Loved the first part and the second part was a great progression... i hope someone picks up and expands again...
2/12/19, 7:27 PM
Well, I really liked the addition you made to the story, PupScout. Maybe it will just take time for people to get used to the "Community Story" idea.
Nov 20, 2018
2/12/19, 7:19 PM
I think a sequel with the player jocks being good boys for Grant sounds awesome.
2/12/19, 7:13 PM
These community stories don't seem to be the hit I was hoping them to be. No one adds to them, they are simply giving their preferred theme of what happens next. I was hoping more writers besides me would have added to the story to see different perspectives and writing styles within the same story. Live and learn I guess
2/12/19, 7:09 PM
These community stories don't seem to be a hit. I liked the idea, but reading the comments above, nobody gets the idea that you can add to it instead of putting in your opinion where it should go. I was hoping several would add to it instead of only me. Oh well.
Feb 11, 2019
2/12/19, 5:57 PM
I think the 'thesaurus' comment is uncalled for and unfair, No words in this story are inappropriately used, over-fancy or 'flowery' - they are all in perfectly well-expressed English. It is well-written, and, as the previous commentator said - it's good for writers to pay attention to detail as this one has. Why is it that those who just carp and make negative comments always hide behind cowardly anonymity? Oh... I guess I just answered my own question... Well done jealouspervet for writing well. Ignore the trolls.
jayemsea13
2/12/19, 5:21 PM
****I also really enjoyed this story and race change isn't usually my thing. I wondered what it would have been like had they switched bodies back but Richard was still stuck as a whore because of the mental rewiring...