Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/12/19, 5:18 AM
The race change is great, but not utalized enough. Maybe if Richard became a lawyer defending immigrant rights.
Buster Red
2/12/19, 5:06 AM
i mean you know me, give me musk and I'm onboard
JMan
2/12/19, 4:31 AM
I'm sorry that response wasn't as strong on this, but I did enjoy it. As said before, please keep up the writing - I enjoy the ideas your mind comes up with!
Feb 11, 2019
Anonymous
2/12/19, 4:16 AM
Very sexy story. I love the description of the boy going down and losing himself
BigMAss
2/12/19, 1:37 AM
Okay, I believe you BrokenPen ;) Looking forward to the next installment.
2/12/19, 1:13 AM
Looking forward to Dad !
Kyle
2/11/19, 11:50 PM
Fantastic! I am a big fan of the Phantom Photobooths series. Loved it. And I'm delighted to see a new story set in that theme. What a great idea, and making it a community story too. Awesome. As much as I'm sure we all want to see resistance fail and succumbing to the pleasure of obedience, I am going to pick option one for resistance and running away for the story complications and narrative joy.
Anonymous
2/11/19, 11:21 PM
option 2 please
Feb 11, 2019
Anonymous
2/11/19, 10:42 PM
another one overwrought with more focus on the thesaurus than the story and derivative of MCGarGuy's stuff per usual but nice to see a pipe story
Rik
2/11/19, 10:04 PM
Another imaginative, well-written & quite gripping story. You have a real talent.