Recent Comments

2/12/19, 7:13 PM
These community stories don't seem to be the hit I was hoping them to be. No one adds to them, they are simply giving their preferred theme of what happens next. I was hoping more writers besides me would have added to the story to see different perspectives and writing styles within the same story. Live and learn I guess
2/12/19, 7:09 PM
These community stories don't seem to be a hit. I liked the idea, but reading the comments above, nobody gets the idea that you can add to it instead of putting in your opinion where it should go. I was hoping several would add to it instead of only me. Oh well.
Feb 11, 2019
2/12/19, 5:57 PM
I think the 'thesaurus' comment is uncalled for and unfair, No words in this story are inappropriately used, over-fancy or 'flowery' - they are all in perfectly well-expressed English. It is well-written, and, as the previous commentator said - it's good for writers to pay attention to detail as this one has. Why is it that those who just carp and make negative comments always hide behind cowardly anonymity? Oh... I guess I just answered my own question... Well done jealouspervet for writing well. Ignore the trolls.
jayemsea13
2/12/19, 5:21 PM
****I also really enjoyed this story and race change isn't usually my thing. I wondered what it would have been like had they switched bodies back but Richard was still stuck as a whore because of the mental rewiring...
Anonymous
2/12/19, 3:51 PM
Great series so far! Thanks!
Dec 9, 2017
JerkinBeforeWork
2/12/19, 3:44 PM
I love this story so much!!!!
Chad
2/12/19, 3:09 PM
That was so hot. I sure hope this story continues.
Feb 11, 2019
Anonymous
2/12/19, 3:02 PM
At least the author took the time to draft and edit a story, caring about the language, the grammar and the syntax. It made the story, which was entertaining, alive. Would that other authors on this site pay such attention to detail.
Feb 11, 2019
Anonymous
2/12/19, 3:02 PM
I want to see the boy start smoking a pipe himself!!! Great story. This was hot!
Anonymous
2/12/19, 5:18 AM
The race change is great, but not utalized enough. Maybe if Richard became a lawyer defending immigrant rights.