A follow up that quickly? What a great surprise first thing Monday morning. I was thinking about this last night and just loved the slow changes to Vince's memories about the math teacher that wasn't hot, then was hot and then Vince fucked. I loved that in this new chapter, eventually things have changed so that Vince banged the football team so much that they had a terrible year. It's all just some really hot minor details that add so much to making the story so much hotter. I also love how you are still delaying Vince and Ty actually hooking up. Ty still hasn't seen Vince's dick on page and things keep resetting somewhat. I am absolutely loving this.

i love this story and would submit as the author did.....have tugged on my little clit for hours reading and re-reading.

What I wouldn’t give to be in his place, such a lucky object! Add me on telegram if you want a no limit twink slave toy to train and own!! @Surcis24

I hope you win the contest, this is great!

This is an amazing story and love your writing.

Such a nice slow burn, you really understand the mind of a true sub! Your writing takes the reader right into the story. Fantastic!

Wildly imaginative, I continue to be in awe of your creativity. The world building you do is always so impressive.

Love this wished it had more wedgies

This is one amazing story.

You mentioned that the question regarding Sebastian and Taylor being sweet or devilish was the question, and here it is both. Sebastian and Ethan's interactions show that Sebastian genuingly doesn't want to force anybody into their harem, and clearly cares for Ethan greatly due to their shared history with each other, and even though it's a bit dubious that Ethan doesn't entirely have his free will anymore, he did lay everything out for Ethan and give him the choice to even leave if he wanted to, and his intent was to help Ethan first and foremost in all of this. Ethan's situation at this point was a not so good one, and it's clear Sebastian did want to help him. Taylor is a bit more dubious with his literal rewiring of James' personality and kind of mentally breaking him, but he did make a point that James kind of was espousing some less than ideal attitudes. On the other hand, literally stripping him of any confidence (even if it also got rid of the arrogance), is a bit dubious, though I'm sure he will eventually get that back though in a less arrogant manner. Alan definitely seems to be moving forward and finding something new now (and frankly, I don't think he and James were going to last long anyway), and Taylor was able to help him find confidence in himself despite being a bottom which is good. As per their discussion with Dez, it's also clear they aren't in this to simply toy with people either or just go nuts in a hedonistic spiral. They want genuine connection in the harem they are building. Even though there is that dubious aspect of surrendering one's choice to Sebastian or Taylor, both of them clearly leave the choice up to the individual they scout out- they do not force it. And frankly most of the people they are scouting seem to have not been struggling or being overwhelmed by needing to choose on difficult things- so Sebastian and Taylor's offer likely seems a mercy in light of that. It will be interesting to see how they manage to work their way through hell. Dez is a useful asset for that, but they do need to nab a lord somehow...and the question there is how are they going to manage and hoodwink and seduce a lord into being with them considering they are likely centuries older and more experienced with the political subterfuge of the demon realm? They'll manage somehow I'm sure, but they'd need to be very clever about it.