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Anonymous
2/10/19, 1:46 PM
Sub elf **
Anonymous
2/10/19, 1:46 PM
Tries to resist, and gets turned into a total sun elf
Mindwinder
2/10/19, 1:21 PM
I think a lot of people would think it would be more exciting to have Kieran snap out of it to see how you'd handle that situation. Me, I'd prefer Kieran succumbed, but only because the photobooth totally flash-fries his brain or something and makes him a total zombie!
Kyle
2/10/19, 11:36 AM
Magnificent. A good, slow burn with a satisfying end.
Anonymous
2/10/19, 11:09 AM
i wish it could have had a muscle growth element in it. But, it still rocks like a hell ; )
LongtimeFan
2/10/19, 8:12 AM
What a great story! I love all of the Jekyll and Hyde references throughout--the character's names (Jordan/Jekyll, Harry/Hyde), Jordan being a scientist, the monologue about being free to act on base impulses (taken almost directly from the novel)...all fantastic. Great job! :D
firesix
2/10/19, 5:49 AM
Edlam we need more Re-Educator, more I Love Him But... and definitely more Retirement. Retirement is my favorite EVER. Especially the chapter with Jon. But what's most important is that you keep writing!
Anonymous
2/10/19, 5:36 AM
I saw a huge improvement from "Putting on the Thong" as this one looks creepier and darker : ) I just think a jock strap or a set of compression wears (or football gears) that could make any nerds or smarts into studs who fight against their opponents with the school spirit.
Teivie
2/10/19, 3:12 AM
Dude! This was awesome! This has EVERYTHING I love in it, the loss of intellect and muscle mass, the slow changes, umph. It was all so hot. I think next you could more deeply explore his kinks, maybe the website suddenly has a few new kinks listed on his profile? For example, maybe he likes being referred to as a female while being fucked. And maybe he eats cum on his food and needs to have at least one load of jizz everyday to stay healthy. More deeply seeded things in his day to day life. I also think maybe he should come into contact with and get fucked by his old work friends?? Eh? Also, more feminine fashion. That was a special treat. Anyways, great stuff all around! Can't wait for more!
UchihaDEMS
2/10/19, 3:05 AM
More older men as obedient slaves of younger males are more than welcome. I still wonder what the company do with them, sell them? Rent them?