Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/9/19, 7:59 PM
not big on tg but the rest was fantastic
2/9/19, 7:51 PM
Whoops! I'm going to have to change all the Dashawns now - first time I've ever accidentally changed the name of a character halfway through a series. Thanks for the headsup JMan
Anonymous
2/9/19, 7:51 PM
Man, oh man. This has been getting the job done in 30 seconds flat multiple times in a row consecutively. Can't wait for more!
JMan
2/9/19, 6:55 PM
I’m hooked ! :) One minor correction: it seems that "Rashawn” becomes "Deshawn" from here on out in the story. Was that an intentional name change, or a typo? I didn't see anything that supported Ricard becoming Rashawn becoming a new person, but wanted to check.
2/9/19, 6:06 PM
I'm really looking forward to the next part, when Paul convinces his son to work for the corporation. (One little note, though: I noticed a lot of typos that probably came from autocorrect. For instance, "baby to pay rent," "most price of places," and "Miller's on their dicks").
Anonymous
2/9/19, 3:47 PM
second fav story!!! nr 1 is bulldawg unit, i hope we see a return of that ;)
Feb 8, 2019
2/9/19, 2:29 PM
K so I read the comments and I'm happy that you all liked it. I'm sorry about the quality of the writing I will look at it again next week and get it proof read. Hopefully I will re-upload next week at some point. thanks for the replies.
Kyle
2/9/19, 9:48 AM
I agree with rubbrsome, this is so well written. Very well done. Can't wait to see where things lead.
Anonymous
2/9/19, 6:56 AM
¡Qué alegría verte de regreso! ¡No puedo esperar para lo que sigue!
Anonymous
2/9/19, 6:52 AM
I'm so excited for the next one!