Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/9/19, 4:22 AM
great story, keep it up!
Feb 8, 2019
Anonymous
2/9/19, 4:21 AM
The story is wonderful. The writing is horrible. Just fix it, a little. You will be surprised how more readable it will be. Your readers are rooting for you. Even the first comment said the story was good. Please, listen.
Anonymous
2/9/19, 12:54 AM
This was great. I'm also very much into that game so the story is right up my alley.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/9/19, 12:31 AM
I agree with the guy above, also why the editor don't don't give to all the heroes of a group or league voyeurism?
KB
2/8/19, 11:42 PM
Just give me that shell choker!!
KB
2/8/19, 11:25 PM
Letting the clothes choose the victim is really hot. Otherwise Domus Perfection can provide uniforms to the government and make the law enforcers under control. or they can convert innocent people to their own security guards. Thinking this already had me rock-hard. Really brilliant story!!
EntrancedGay92
2/8/19, 11:24 PM
Came the minute dad appeared wearing the necklace. Great job!
2/8/19, 10:57 PM
Where in the hell is this beach. I'm ready to pack my bags ... actually .. fuck the bags ... I'm not going to need clothes anyway.
2/8/19, 10:56 PM
This is an exceptionally well-written story. Everything that's described, I'm able to picture in my mind's eye. I also know I'm enthralled when I'm left wanting more ... and am eagerly wanting that next chapter. Because of the plants, I wonder if this is a "body snatchers" type scenario? Or is just some enhanced sex lubricant? What is the mystery behind the seed pods? I'm hooked!
Anonymous
2/8/19, 10:16 PM
don't stop now, you have us on edge! pun intended