Recent Comments

Oct 6, 2018
Anonymous
2/10/19, 12:07 AM
Any plans to continue it?
Beast
2/9/19, 11:22 PM
I am learning Demonology. I would like to summon a demon. Can anyone please help. I loved the story please keep going. Thank you
Anonymous
2/9/19, 10:57 PM
Seeing the thoroughness of the reprogramming is hot.
Anonymous
2/9/19, 7:59 PM
not big on tg but the rest was fantastic
2/9/19, 7:51 PM
Whoops! I'm going to have to change all the Dashawns now - first time I've ever accidentally changed the name of a character halfway through a series. Thanks for the headsup JMan
Anonymous
2/9/19, 7:51 PM
Man, oh man. This has been getting the job done in 30 seconds flat multiple times in a row consecutively. Can't wait for more!
JMan
2/9/19, 6:55 PM
I’m hooked ! :) One minor correction: it seems that "Rashawn” becomes "Deshawn" from here on out in the story. Was that an intentional name change, or a typo? I didn't see anything that supported Ricard becoming Rashawn becoming a new person, but wanted to check.
2/9/19, 6:06 PM
I'm really looking forward to the next part, when Paul convinces his son to work for the corporation. (One little note, though: I noticed a lot of typos that probably came from autocorrect. For instance, "baby to pay rent," "most price of places," and "Miller's on their dicks").
Anonymous
2/9/19, 3:47 PM
second fav story!!! nr 1 is bulldawg unit, i hope we see a return of that ;)
Feb 8, 2019
2/9/19, 2:29 PM
K so I read the comments and I'm happy that you all liked it. I'm sorry about the quality of the writing I will look at it again next week and get it proof read. Hopefully I will re-upload next week at some point. thanks for the replies.