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ForgottenCradle
2/7/19, 4:16 PM
this was just beautiful 😍
Anonymous
2/7/19, 3:52 PM
It was an amazing setting and a complete story !! There could be some prequels, spin-offs, or franchise? Domus Perfections could own its own sport teams with perfected athletes or run a newspaper company who hide the truths : )
2/7/19, 1:19 PM
This is a fantastic story, MasterJerker, and I really loved the transformation scenes. But it feels like an entirely complete work, with no obvious openings for other writers to continue the story. (I can think of lots of possible spin-offs, though...)
Anonymous
2/7/19, 5:40 AM
Keeping in a consistent tense would have helped a lot. This would have been better if we'd gotten into their heads more. Not hopeless in any way, but would have been better if edited more.
Anonymous
2/7/19, 5:19 AM
Very hot. I'm looking forward to reading what Alex experiences when the necklace is put on. I so enjoy your stories, Hypnothrill.
BobbyC
2/7/19, 4:22 AM
I love how you turn these hetero-whores into homo-whores. At the end of the day, they're not really that different. It's just who/what they fucking is different. I find it hot. Keep writing!!
Anonymous
2/7/19, 4:20 AM
One of your best stories. Loved it!!!
blankbot@yahoo.com
2/7/19, 3:37 AM
Perfect.
rubaluva
2/7/19, 3:26 AM
Great story. Obviously Dylan can't enjoy what happens, otherwise it wouldn't be a punishment. If he enjoyed doing what he was dared to do, then the premise of the story falls to pieces as there would be no reason to have the dares, Dylan would just do what he was told willingly since he enjoyed it.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
2/7/19, 1:57 AM
Can you shoot me an email about an idea please?