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Feb 4, 2019
Corrupted jock 18
2/7/19, 9:00 PM
I want to hear about the men that were corrupted when they fucked him,and how they spread the corruption to their families and friends
Happy Endings
2/7/19, 8:05 PM
Given my clothing fetishes...I need that pit!
crashlander2002@yahoo.com
2/7/19, 8:00 PM
Hot story, hope there's a sequel!
Mar 21, 2017
Anonymous
2/7/19, 7:55 PM
I would love to see this get continued
nycboot
2/7/19, 5:51 PM
"Cosmic Emporium, Nowhere At Present." - I love it! Off to a great and intriguing start!
ForgottenCradle
2/7/19, 4:16 PM
this was just beautiful 😍
Anonymous
2/7/19, 3:52 PM
It was an amazing setting and a complete story !! There could be some prequels, spin-offs, or franchise? Domus Perfections could own its own sport teams with perfected athletes or run a newspaper company who hide the truths : )
2/7/19, 1:19 PM
This is a fantastic story, MasterJerker, and I really loved the transformation scenes. But it feels like an entirely complete work, with no obvious openings for other writers to continue the story. (I can think of lots of possible spin-offs, though...)
Anonymous
2/7/19, 5:40 AM
Keeping in a consistent tense would have helped a lot. This would have been better if we'd gotten into their heads more. Not hopeless in any way, but would have been better if edited more.
Anonymous
2/7/19, 5:19 AM
Very hot. I'm looking forward to reading what Alex experiences when the necklace is put on. I so enjoy your stories, Hypnothrill.