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scorpio prince
10/27/24, 9:37 PM
i love this story!!
10/27/24, 9:08 PM
The literal exchange of self shown here is amazing.
10/26/24, 8:24 PM
Love the reversal at the end. Leo the only one end up loving about cars and the rest being just a dumb hungry bottom.

10/27/24, 6:58 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Hi. I'm very glad you liked the ending. Thanks for the feedback.
10/24/24, 11:40 AM
Conor... I want him! ji's cross slapping against the pec muscle while he fucked his red headed friend... your ability to bring the reader deeply into your story - its nextlevel THANK YOU so much! I am really enjoying it all so much. VERY VERY good!

10/27/24, 5:59 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks again! There's some tradeoff between describing the situation, which helps the reader picture what is going on, and moving the action forward, which I think is necessary to ultimately prevent boredom. I hope I am striking the right balance.
Lampshade15
10/27/24, 4:26 PM
Hottest chapter yet!

10/27/24, 5:56 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Thank you! Nice to hear people are enjoying my fantasies :)
10/27/24, 4:10 PM
THIS is my favorite story on the site. I really like Mark and I love when David whispers in the ear of his prey. This is so well -written and intensely fantastic. THANKYOU

10/27/24, 5:56 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Wow! Really high praise! Thanks!
10/27/24, 1:25 AM
This was so good, I can't wait to see more

10/27/24, 5:54 PM
@[Reddogsss](/user/show/10033308) Thanks! There's a new chapter up now, hope you enjoy it!
Anonymous
10/25/24, 7:43 AM
Bravo!

10/27/24, 5:53 PM
@Anonymous Thank you!
10/24/24, 2:48 PM
Another super hot chapter! Love the quick, cool worldbuilding that lets the sex still have center stage. And damn, it’s good sex. Really turned me on when the boys were free of the illusion; would love to see more of that semi-aware controlled POV going forward. Thanks for posting.

10/27/24, 5:53 PM
@[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) Thanks for the feedback. I'm trying to balance plot advancement while keeping it steamy, so I'm glad that's working for you! Also appreciate the suggestion on playing with awareness and control. I hope you find the next chapter entertaining, it has some more elements of that.
10/24/24, 12:01 PM
i went back and had a re-read! WOW! Even better after the following chapters to revisit this incredible story. LOVE IT. I wanna meet that stranger

10/27/24, 5:46 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Haha, I'd love to meet the "stranger" too! And very nice to know you are rereading this - the best compliment I can imagine!