Recent Comments

Vicbiguy
2/4/19, 6:18 AM
well this certainly is one fucking hot story! Cant wait for another instalment but please get an editor or proof reader, the WRITING IS SO POOR IT SPOILS THE STORY?
Anonymous
2/4/19, 4:23 AM
Hypnothrill - You write your stories. If you followed BBoy's advice your story would be something like this: Oh, I have a cock. Let me find someone to suck my cock. Oh, there you are. You have a mouth. You have a hole. Oh, I just cum. Thanks. Your discerning readers appreciate the slow boil. It brings out the best of flavors.
2/4/19, 3:30 AM
(gives M. Greene a standing ovation)
2/4/19, 3:18 AM
Of my 14 complete stories / series on this site, 8 end 'happily', 5 don't and 1 [the Eden Virus] has both outcomes, so I think the 'mean-spirited' remark is rather undeserved. I have been criticised for my 'happy' endings as well as my 'unhappy' ones, which only goes to show that it is impossible to please everyone all of the time. As longingslave says above: "it's all a matter of perception". Almost all the stories on this site involve involuntary power exchange, which most people would consider 'mean' to a certain extent. Without conflict of some kind, there is no real story. For example, the beginning of 'Cinderella' could be seen as mean-spirited given how unpleasant the ugly sisters are to the poor girl. When I write for this site, I am merely seeking to entertain other gay men to the best of my ability. To those who find my stories 'mean-spirited', I suggest that you stop reading them and switch to a romantic story website or perhaps one that's all about kittens.
2/4/19, 3:10 AM
Hmmm... Well, I don't know... :3 What do you think?
Anonymous
2/4/19, 2:49 AM
Great short! Would love to see a series!
Anonymous
2/4/19, 1:13 AM
That was nice
Jun 22, 2006
Anonymous
2/4/19, 12:52 AM
I loved it. It'd be really hot if Mario fucks him the next one
longingslave
2/3/19, 11:37 PM
I'm curious where you take the story from here with Cassie's involvement. Cruel or not, you should take the ending you want to write the most. I for one will be happy to read whatever ending you decide to choose as both can be appealing to the right audiences. Either way, thumbs up! As for being "mean-spirited" in comments above, it's all a matter of perception. Many would be happy to classify all kinds of hypno manipulations in stories here as mean spirited, but doubt that most readers would agree with such a statement. I personally find stories that are unyielding in their down spiral, ethical issues aside, are the hottest as they are the closest to reflect reality and not a fairy tale romance. If you manage to elicit emotions in the reader, regardless if that's happiness, sadness, horniness or what not, then you have succeeded.
StroppyAuthor
2/3/19, 10:58 PM
very sweet! I like!