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2/4/19, 3:10 AM
Hmmm... Well, I don't know... :3 What do you think?
Anonymous
2/4/19, 2:49 AM
Great short! Would love to see a series!
Anonymous
2/4/19, 1:13 AM
That was nice
Jun 22, 2006
Anonymous
2/4/19, 12:52 AM
I loved it. It'd be really hot if Mario fucks him the next one
longingslave
2/3/19, 11:37 PM
I'm curious where you take the story from here with Cassie's involvement. Cruel or not, you should take the ending you want to write the most. I for one will be happy to read whatever ending you decide to choose as both can be appealing to the right audiences. Either way, thumbs up! As for being "mean-spirited" in comments above, it's all a matter of perception. Many would be happy to classify all kinds of hypno manipulations in stories here as mean spirited, but doubt that most readers would agree with such a statement. I personally find stories that are unyielding in their down spiral, ethical issues aside, are the hottest as they are the closest to reflect reality and not a fairy tale romance. If you manage to elicit emotions in the reader, regardless if that's happiness, sadness, horniness or what not, then you have succeeded.
StroppyAuthor
2/3/19, 10:58 PM
very sweet! I like!
2/3/19, 10:56 PM
I glad I could be helpful. It's I who should thank you for your wonderful story.
2/3/19, 10:33 PM
Great beginning, Hypnothrill! But then, you know what a fan I am of the set-up... I'm glad rubbrsome said all that above -- it keeps me from having to do all that typing myself. You're a great writer -- I'm a great fan -- and don't change your style one bit!
Martin
2/3/19, 10:32 PM
@KingDawg: I've added your piece to the story directly. To add something to the story, please use the “Edit” button. Adding as a comment doesn’t change the story itself.
Rik
2/3/19, 10:22 PM
I'm still enjoying your story. Hope that you give it a "happy" ending. Don't want to see Timmy sold on & all that- seems cruel. I would like to see the three of them stick together & then the premise remains positive & not mean spirited.