Recent Comments

StroppyAuthor
2/3/19, 10:58 PM
very sweet! I like!
2/3/19, 10:56 PM
I glad I could be helpful. It's I who should thank you for your wonderful story.
2/3/19, 10:33 PM
Great beginning, Hypnothrill! But then, you know what a fan I am of the set-up... I'm glad rubbrsome said all that above -- it keeps me from having to do all that typing myself. You're a great writer -- I'm a great fan -- and don't change your style one bit!
Martin
2/3/19, 10:32 PM
@KingDawg: I've added your piece to the story directly. To add something to the story, please use the “Edit” button. Adding as a comment doesn’t change the story itself.
Rik
2/3/19, 10:22 PM
I'm still enjoying your story. Hope that you give it a "happy" ending. Don't want to see Timmy sold on & all that- seems cruel. I would like to see the three of them stick together & then the premise remains positive & not mean spirited.
Feb 3, 2019
2/3/19, 10:18 PM
Same here, really like aware stories, and I'm happy you made it!
Feb 3, 2019
thenakedginger@gmail.com
2/3/19, 10:17 PM
Wonderfully done. I love aware stories and there are so few of them. Added bonus for public play ;)
Anonymous
2/3/19, 10:06 PM
more!
Anonymous
2/3/19, 9:44 PM
Really hot. Hope we will be able to read a little bit more for those of us international without a lot of money to share :/
Anonymous
2/3/19, 9:37 PM
I read through this, the Catalyst and the Eden Virus today and it seems like it just seems to be a theme with M. Greene's work. Especially the alternate ending to Eden Virus. It really unsettled me but it was written well. By unsettled I mean really saddened and just hoping for anything to save the victims. I'm kind of confused as to whether or not Wolf and Mullen's affections were just a ruse to meet the result they wanted or if it was just a sudden drastic change. Your stuff definitely gets me invested though, Green. Even if I'm kinda bummed out.