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Feb 3, 2019
thenakedginger@gmail.com
2/3/19, 10:17 PM
Wonderfully done. I love aware stories and there are so few of them. Added bonus for public play ;)
Anonymous
2/3/19, 10:06 PM
more!
Anonymous
2/3/19, 9:44 PM
Really hot. Hope we will be able to read a little bit more for those of us international without a lot of money to share :/
Anonymous
2/3/19, 9:37 PM
I read through this, the Catalyst and the Eden Virus today and it seems like it just seems to be a theme with M. Greene's work. Especially the alternate ending to Eden Virus. It really unsettled me but it was written well. By unsettled I mean really saddened and just hoping for anything to save the victims. I'm kind of confused as to whether or not Wolf and Mullen's affections were just a ruse to meet the result they wanted or if it was just a sudden drastic change. Your stuff definitely gets me invested though, Green. Even if I'm kinda bummed out.
EntrancedGay92
2/3/19, 9:11 PM
Great concept here, Hypnothrill! I'm not sure what sent me over the edge more; how we don't see Ryan's fall into hypnotic bliss, the description of the gay man falling under, or the fact he was wearing a speedo. Really hope there is more to come with this series!
KinkDawg
2/3/19, 9:06 PM
I tried to push my wallet and keys into my new form fitting pants but there was no room. In trying, though, I felt a piece pf paper in the front pocket. I pulled it out and read it. "If you're reading this you're probably planning to come looking for me. You won't find me but I highly recommend a bar whose address is listed below. You'll find it more to your new liking. I'm not unfair so I'll give you the warning you never gave your stealthed bottom's: If you can make it a week without getting bred you'll revert back to who you were before. If you return to stealthing, the changes will come again and become permanent. If someone cums inside you without a condom, the changes will become permanent immediately. I really do wish you good luck. Either way, I wish you a good time". I finished reading the message and shoved the paper back in my pocket. Somehow I knew he would communicate with me through that paper. I looked in the mirror admiring the body of someone I would fuck hard. But this time I felt a need deep inside my ass. I needed to be fucked. The more I thought about getting fucked the wetter I felt my ass becoming. I shoved my I.D. and some money into my back pocket and clipped my keys to my belt hoop and headed out. I knew the bar: it was a leather and Levi bar in the South side. I wasn't feeling good about this.
Anonymous
2/3/19, 8:26 PM
This endlessly long story had potential but it is too repetitious, predictable and mean-spirited. I am actually rooting for Cassie.
Anonymous
2/3/19, 8:23 PM
I actually love the set up. It give more background, and it sets things up for a better payoff. Hopefully the brothers will get together.
Feb 3, 2019
Anonymous
2/3/19, 8:13 PM
SO HOT! Cant wait for the next part
Anonymous
2/3/19, 8:12 PM
wow.... absolutely love how you detail domination and humiliation, the sequence removing his ability to read was hot as fuck