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2/3/19, 5:13 PM
I'm going to take that as a backhanded compliment, Bboy. And to give a serious answer to your rhetorical questions: in real life, I greatly prefer foreplay over sexual intercourse, and my stories operate the same way. There is some sex, but a lot of it is about erotic anticipation and a sense of slowly rising tension. Plus, in this one, I tried to build in some extra character backstory that should pay off in the end.
Anonymous
2/3/19, 4:56 PM
is there going to be a continuation? would love to see the wedding!
Dec 29, 2018
Mdlftr
2/3/19, 4:53 PM
Sweet transformation story. Their exteriors changed, but they were still the same people inside. Very inspiring - muscle growth without dumbing down, or becoming a bully. Good job! Thank you for writing this! Loved the Spiderman homage kiss at the end.
Bboy
2/3/19, 4:44 PM
Boring ,why always a set up? Why not an actual sex filled story? This isn't a creative writing course!
Jan 5, 2019
Mdlftr
2/3/19, 4:12 PM
I love this basic muscle growth and masculinization story. "I'm finally my father's son." What every man wants! Not to mention the muscles and height! Good job!
Nov 9, 2017
Anonymous
2/3/19, 4:08 PM
God I came so hard reading this, you did an amazing job.
Anonymous
2/3/19, 4:03 PM
Funny revenge change! Maybe now Brett will understand "How the othuth's lives are lived"
Anonymous
2/3/19, 3:11 PM
new way to insert photos? several improvements here, great!!
2/3/19, 3:02 PM
another great Chapter - thank you. bits that stick out for me are the tatts and how Timmy its becoming natural for him to have them. also "From what I can tell, the guests are all gay men, like us." how Timmy now refers himself as being gay. i suppose i would have liked him to have called his ex Cassie a bitch like his Boss. but then from what i can see hes not got into course language yet maybe some he needs to develop
Anonymous
2/3/19, 2:50 PM
Love your work, Hypnothrill! Looking forward to the next installment.