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Anonymous
10/25/24, 7:43 AM
Bravo!

10/27/24, 5:53 PM
@Anonymous Thank you!
10/24/24, 2:48 PM
Another super hot chapter! Love the quick, cool worldbuilding that lets the sex still have center stage. And damn, it’s good sex. Really turned me on when the boys were free of the illusion; would love to see more of that semi-aware controlled POV going forward. Thanks for posting.

10/27/24, 5:53 PM
@[tenser13](/user/show/1280137) Thanks for the feedback. I'm trying to balance plot advancement while keeping it steamy, so I'm glad that's working for you! Also appreciate the suggestion on playing with awareness and control. I hope you find the next chapter entertaining, it has some more elements of that.
10/24/24, 12:01 PM
i went back and had a re-read! WOW! Even better after the following chapters to revisit this incredible story. LOVE IT. I wanna meet that stranger

10/27/24, 5:46 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Haha, I'd love to meet the "stranger" too! And very nice to know you are rereading this - the best compliment I can imagine!
10/27/24, 3:22 PM
I would love to see more from them. I'll also check out the other work.
Hazard0707
10/27/24, 7:27 AM
It's really good but the he/she him/her weren't very consistent. Very good story but feels gender swapped and things were missed or something. It pulls from getting into the story but I could just be overly critical. Either way no offense meant just constructive criticism
10/27/24, 5:48 AM
Wow amazing! 🤩
10/27/24, 5:40 AM
Woooowowowowoww I love this. Like a LOT. Well done!
Anonymous
10/27/24, 5:38 AM
I just can't deal with all of the feminine references you've left in. Even the clothing and lipstick choices are clearly for the woman who was in the original story. I love the C/NC seduction into whatever Jamie will end up as, but that "whatever" doesn't sound like anything that would arouse me at all. In the kindest way possible, maybe you should stick to doing femdom stories. This practically is one.
Anonymous
10/27/24, 3:26 AM
I love seeing stories of Nightwing getting turned into a bottom, and this one might be my favourite. I loved the somewhat romantic end to it all, that was a nice twist.
10/27/24, 3:07 AM
Unreal...I sooo badly hoped when I hit puberty the gods would gift me with a giant cock...was not to be , obviously, lol